Half The World Poem by Daegal

Half The World

Rating: 4.8


Half the world lives,
Half the world makes,
Half the world gives
While the other half takes.

Half the world hates,
Half the world runs away,
Half the world's late,
Half the world praises the day.

Half the world is,
Half the world was,
Half the world thinks,
Half the world does.

Half the world lies,
Half the world burns,
Half the world cries
While the other half turns.

Half the world cares,
Half the world weeps,
Half the world shares,
Half the world keeps.

Half the world sings,
Half the world laughs,
Half the world brings,
Half the world tries to be the other half.

End.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Golden Heart 21 January 2008

interesting and cool, and powerful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice flow and beat! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! wonderful; @ I'm a new poet so i only have one 'masterpiece' if i may say so myself, please give your comment to it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! thanksssss! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! again, great job

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Jennifer Duran 23 April 2007

oh my gosh this is such a terrific poem and its unique i love it

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Straight 2 The Point 10 September 2007

basically the U.S is all the above

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meikhsj kaudisjhdsy 16 November 2006

I really like this poems alot good job

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Kantian clememtson 17 April 2018

what is half of a poem

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ian Hopkins 21 February 2012

An unfortunate rip-off of the Rush song, Half the World, from their 1996 album Test for Echo. For all who enjoyed this poem, I recommend checking out the original. It's a great song. I hope your other poems are more unique, Daegal.

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Irena Novicova 10 June 2009

Your poem is awesome what else can I say.. =)

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Bianca Tini 26 October 2008

Wow this is such a good poem i agree it just makes sense its really inspirational for me too write my own poems and understand how and what to write for class cudos

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MCKENZi : ] 12 February 2008

i know i've commented on this poem before, but obviously not. i've read this soo many times. it just makes soo much sense. i love it! ! great work: ]

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