(1) only treasure
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is hanging loosely
the red slip on his treasure
right away will fall
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(HALKU - new variety haiku. Thursday,03 January 2008 14: 39 the new variety of the miniature under the name 'Halku' comes from - from the slip.) I invented it to play with the word and the association, using one topic - in this case - SLIPS. Holding the rigorous principle applying to construction in this play is an additional impediment - as similarly as in the haiku: 5.7,5. Since it is my idea - so I just determined principles. Maria Barbara Korynt
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This type of the poetry resembles the haiku. Even though principles of writing are less rigorous, necessary elements are an impediment: the determined subject matter and the need to fit words in three lines (lines) and for structure 5.7,5. It is difficult, but as can be seen negotiable. I like him on account of the resulting advantage of this discipline. Such writing is teaching self-disciplines, thinkings, frugalities of the word. He lets then notice mistakes in other poems. A play on words is an additional positive element, with times the ambiguity and the element of the humour not to say sometimes of raciness. Very much I like HALKU, they are teaching me and they are entertaining. I recommend everyone as part of the exercise. I like it very much. Thank you :)) Dagmara Anna