Hamlet In Old Age Poem by Daniel Brick

Hamlet In Old Age

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It's not because
my memory is failing me
that I forget something
once precious, and
only now find traces
that restore it
to my grasp. It's not
that, that's not it.
Something insidious
burrows through our lives,
surfaces when it will,
and takes from us
a piece of our confidence:
a memory still suffused
in light, an awareness of
patience as strength,
a soul-truth accompanied
by music in minor key,
a heart-truth at one
with the silence
beneath all things.
Yes, dear Ophelia,
except for you and me,
all the rest I submit
willingly to that silence.

Thursday, February 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: memory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 17 February 2017

Hamlet was frozen by his death into a portrait of a young man- -so young he teetered on the edge between maturity and immaturity where he wobbled back and forth back and forth due to his rage and his conscience, some say cowardice but I don't that would be the word I would choose. He didn't get to live to old age but you pose the situation here as what would he be like as an old man. I think this intriguing question deserves a lot more reflection than I have given it, but off the top of my head I don't think his memories of his life and times would have gained much wisdom from the years that passed. If I had ever believed in his love for Ophelia, I still think he would scarcely remember her as she really was or remember any real emotion he felt for her. He might remember a pretended love, a dramatic over-blown love for her. He was a very dramatic young man but weren't we all more emotional as youths... Still there is something about Hamlet that makes me think he would have remained at least half as theatrical and dramatic and egocentric.So I think that he might say this closing line about Ophelia but it would be said with an eye for its dramatic appeal and not much truth would be in it. I think he would be more inclined to discuss skulls and the disturbing relationship between his mother and his uncle. I don't know, Daniel, the more I ponder this the more I lean this way and that. Oh, no, the more I consider Hamlet the more I become like him... yoicks. A huge poem, Daniel, huge. 10000 angels sing this poem to its reward

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Bharati Nayak 11 February 2017

Yes, dear Ophelia, except for you and me, all the rest I submit willingly to that silence. - - - - - - - - Some memories fade, some we never allow to fade- - -A stunning write about our beautiful memories we keep alive always.

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Souren Mondal 11 February 2017

The poem is a beautiful one Daniel. Since I have turned 25, a quarter of a century old, I have gradually come to realise how precious some memories are. Often forgotten these moments reside underneath my consciousness, and come to the surface when I least expect them. Some make me feel happy, some sad, but all of them fill me with a nostalgia for the days that went away. I guess it is not the memories themselves - I don't thik we can remember an incident exactly like it were - but the emotions we felt during those time. The first kiss, the first time falling in love, the heartbreaks; none of them perhaps can be remembered so vividly like the first time. With age the memories become weak, the emotions that were associated with them stronger. Truly, I believe the Prince of Denmark surely has forgotten how he once directed his beloved to the nunnery, but surely remembers the emotions that went through his heart. A poem of memories and emotions, and a beautiful one dear.

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Sandra Feldman 09 February 2017

So much in our existence does silently go with us And the memories lie buried not far below But the love we lost, remember or still have in us That's the one thing, we never won't let go. This is my interpretation of this more than lonely and heartfelt love story.. So finely written, so softly yet emotionally written. The Older Hamlet speaking and feeling, a fantasti and fae reaching idea, Making this poem, all the more alluring.

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Daniel Brick 09 February 2017

You got to the heart of the poem. I added the Hamlet and Ophelia lines after writing the poem just for specificity and resonance. Initially I wrote it to represent no individual but everyone. All of us.

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