Hand For Life Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Hand For Life

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I read
Re read and observed
Whether I really deserved
'Her hand for life time' comment reserved

She has sent me a letter
For life time partner
Precisely a deep matter
I am glad and feel better

I read contents
Not much to comment
Yet a serious proposal
I must have quick disposal

What do I reply?
She has made honest try
Now I feel little shy
She may ask any time, why?

I come to the term
With all the details in turn
'Yes, we unite on His name'
Solemnly assure and claim

We shall stay blessed
Even if life may be chased
Never part in any situation
Run the life smooth with strong bond and relation

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I read Re read and observed Whether I really deserved “Her hand for life time” comment reserved

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Queeny Gona May god guide you to run the life smooth though you are chased 59 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Unwritten Soul 31 July 2012

The sincerity is the main reason here...i see...It really nice that the hands you wanted to give is just to care because of only hopng to tie humans to one rope, tied to Him with no ask for return, that's great! ..keep it up for nice poem in the future_SOul

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Kasia Fedyk 30 July 2012

How beautiful and profound, the union of two in one with God's hand in Blessing eternal is the light that dwell within.

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Meena Mustafa 30 July 2012

Wow! A beautiful write... I too love these lines...I come to the term With all the details in turn 'Yes, we unite on His name' Solemnly assure and claim God be praised! and thank you very much.

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Dear Sir, Nice poem. I am impressed with the followig lines: Yes, we unite on His name Solemnly assure and claim Tie the knot (Idiom) Letters may be many; Comments may be many; What is needed is a knot, As wedding union taught With regards, K. Sadasivan, Chennai Jul 30,2012

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ANALIA FREE P.. So... did you say yes? ? Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: Hand for life (Score: 1) Queeny Gona May god guide you to run t

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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