Hanging there
suspended in time
waiting
attached to a golden
thread
Its' beginning to stretch
getting taut
snap!
it breaks release
stretch, taut, snap....final release! brilliant brevity, Heather.
That break is a release. It is not pleasant to be in stretched taut state for long. Thank you for a beautiful poem with economy of words.
Wow a fantastic poem so unique n d golden thread enhances its poetic effect. Thanx 4 yor reviews too. Take care heather :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow. Wonderful poem Heather.. Short and Sweet. Loved it.. Thank you for the lovely comments for my poems Heather...Thanks a lot.