Philo Yan

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Happy Birthday!


If today is your special day,
I wish you a Happy Birthday,

This Fruit and Chocolate Cake
Though can't be eaten coz it is fake
I hope you would receive and take
A real delicious fruit and chocolate cake.

Modified version:

Today is your Special Day,
I wish you a Very Happy Birthday!
The Fruit and Chocolate Cake,
Though can't be eaten because it's fake.
I hope you would receive and take,
A real delicious fruit and chocolate cake!

Submitted: Wednesday, August 15, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, August 21, 2012

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem was accompanied with a color pencil drawing I did depicting a square chocolate cake shaped like a basket. On top are filled with red juicy strawberries, green leaves, yellow, purple and blue flowers at the corners on a silver platter

You may view my drawing at:
//picasaweb.google.com/115604348708138178965/MyArtCorner2012#5776790047559865234

Thank you for looking and Have An AweSome Day!

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