Philo Yan

Freshman - 629 Points (Malaysia)

Happy Birthday! - Poem by Philo Yan

If today is your special day,
I wish you a Happy Birthday,

This Fruit and Chocolate Cake
Though can't be eaten coz it is fake
I hope you would receive and take
A real delicious fruit and chocolate cake.

Modified version:

Today is your Special Day,
I wish you a Very Happy Birthday!
The Fruit and Chocolate Cake,
Though can't be eaten because it's fake.
I hope you would receive and take,
A real delicious fruit and chocolate cake!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem was accompanied with a color pencil drawing I did depicting a square chocolate cake shaped like a basket. On top are filled with red juicy strawberries, green leaves, yellow, purple and blue flowers at the corners on a silver platter

You may view my drawing at:
//picasaweb.google.com/115604348708138178965/MyArtCorner2012#5776790047559865234

Thank you for looking and Have An AweSome Day!

Comments about Happy Birthday! by Philo Yan

  • Freshman - 629 Points Philo Yan (8/15/2012 6:14:00 AM)

    Thanks Leslie for your comment. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 879 Points Leslie Philibert (8/15/2012 5:38:00 AM)

    Funny, wry poem, that needs the poet`s notes as background (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 21, 2012


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