Bing, bang, boom,
Explosion!
Pen or pencil
Big commotion,
A poem from the heart,
Ready to zoom,
It may be fair,
It may be good,
But most of all,
Should be understood.
I agree with Kelly, I don't find obscure poems -poems, I pass them by. Good ink.
Oh! I agree! Purposely being obscure is not 'high art', it is aggravating to me. Say what you mean and say it well, I say
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
boom, bing, bang, wow! thought punctures mind with gore now there is no thinking but grey matter is on the floor