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Happy Tomorrow

Pearls of dew on the grass
A pearl on my palm
Balm
Calm
Pass
The days of sorrow
Shiny, tiny glass
Shows
Happy tomorrow

(For S.W.)

2008/10/10

Submitted: Friday, October 10, 2008
Edited: Friday, December 05, 2008


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  • BEAU GOLDEN (10/27/2008 9:53:00 PM)

    this was short and sweet and pretty.

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  • palas kumar ray (10/26/2008 5:53:00 AM)

    A sure solace amidst hopelessness is tomorrow.

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  • DEAD PLEASURES (10/24/2008 3:30:00 PM)

    Beutiful work
    Very delicate.
    =]

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  • Leon & Sarah Harris (10/23/2008 3:29:00 PM)

    wonderful dedication to a very special friend.....i love the way you put the words together

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  • Janice Etienne (10/22/2008 4:46:00 PM)

    it's so cute how you put your unique unparalleled thoughts
    into little words that portrays a bigger picture

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  • Mamta Agarwal (10/21/2008 9:48:00 PM)

    lovely- so serene, wise and true.

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  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (10/20/2008 3:59:00 AM)

    Lovely!


    Dorothy

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  • Leon & Sarah Harris (10/18/2008 5:14:00 PM)

    You beautiful my dear!

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  • Ershad Mazumder (10/10/2008 10:26:00 PM)

    No words to say
    No words to hear
    You know better than me
    What do I want to say
    I know better than you
    What do you want to say

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  • Samantha Williams (10/10/2008 2:49:00 PM)

    Awwwww that was beautiful! ! ! ! You are very sweet! ! ! ! ! !

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