Happy Tomorrow Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Happy Tomorrow

Rating: 5.0


Pearls of dew on the grass
A pearl on my palm
Balm
Calm
Pass
The days of sorrow
Shiny, tiny glass
Shows
Happy tomorrow

(For S.W.)

2008/10/10

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 10 October 2008

Pass The days of sorrow Shiny, tiny glass Shows Happy tomorrow --- You have explicitely penned out a great piece of hope...i love your lines. a 10.

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Reshma Ramesh 10 October 2008

superb...simple..sweet

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Egi David Perdana 10 October 2008

very well, why we need happy tommorow and always on happy endings?

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anne adam 10 October 2008

cool poem i love it keep goin

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Tsira Goge 10 October 2008

Gentle and sensitive dedication... Your optimism sparkles... And yours 'tomorrow' also. 10... Tsira

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BEAU GOLDEN 27 October 2008

this was short and sweet and pretty.

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DEAD PLEASURES 24 October 2008

Beutiful work Very delicate. =]

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Leon & Sarah Harris 23 October 2008

wonderful dedication to a very special friend.....i love the way you put the words together

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Janice Etienne 22 October 2008

it's so cute how you put your unique unparalleled thoughts into little words that portrays a bigger picture

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Mamta Agarwal 21 October 2008

lovely- so serene, wise and true.

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