_ _ _ = Hardcore Poem by Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl

_ _ _ = Hardcore

Rating: 3.0


Your tender touch
Is my reminder that love
Canbe a fairy tale
But the rough force
Taken upon me
Reminds me it can also
Be HELL
If it hurts so bad
Why is everyone searching for it
I know i love what i can't get
But i would die tryin to look for it my whole life
So i settled for the next great thing
Besides the TRUE love.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 29 January 2009

I'm not sure what to make of this. There seems to be something missing for me to comprehend it correctly. I'm not sure what it is. Maybe it will come to me in time. Anyway, a very interesting piece. GW62

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Kevin Carney 02 August 2010

I like this write, so honest and maybe at one point we have been there. Its short but right to the point. Great job, I did read it twice.

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Beau Bennett 13 April 2009

lol awww i think im falling in love

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Chip Reed 10 February 2009

good poem like the idea

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Amy Ludidi 07 February 2009

thought provoking idea about the search of love, quite a bit of truth there..however, the title is just wong, why hardcore?

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Jim Norausky 07 February 2009

True love with a tender touch is shared by many without abuse. Hope all will find it. Interesting poem. Jim

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