Vasto Grom

Rookie - 10 Points (01/19/1990 / Houston, TX)

Hate - Poem by Vasto Grom

Just like the sun rises and sets each day.
So will my hatred continually eat away.
Until everything is gone.
And all that is left are the pictures I've drawn.
It burns so very deep inside of me.
Slowly consuming my flesh until it can burst free.
Then it will grow as it burns down all I worked so hard to create.
Sadly though I know this is just a matter of fate.
Even during times of peace it burns inside of me with its twisted light.
And I know that it could finally win even now on this night.
This hatred burns inside me so.
A hatred you will never know.
And everyday this hate will grow.
This hate that I must never show.


Comments about Hate by Vasto Grom

  • Silver Star - 3,214 Points Godfrey Morris (3/5/2015 4:42:00 PM)

    I sense a lot of anger in your poems. I think this is a great way to let it go. Let your anger be your fuel. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,442 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (9/4/2011 12:32:00 AM)

    HATRED SHOULD BE TURNED TO LOVE
    GO SHOW IT
    GO EXPRESS IT
    AND WHEN IT IS DONE
    AND WHEN IT IS GONE
    LOVE WILL RULE YOUR HEART

    APART FROM THIS
    I FEEL THE INTENSITY OF YOUR POEM
    IN YOUR WORDS
    AND IN THE THEME YOU WROTE ABOUT
    NICE LINES
    NICE POEM. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ameera Aidrus (9/1/2011 6:12:00 AM)

    wow.....awsum lines! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 25, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 3, 2012


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