Hate me, if you can!
Hate the little star in the skies
When it falls down my eyes
Hate this fragrance.... I got
Collecting flowers... in the journey
From my inner to your heart!
Hate the words!
I learned... from the love...
Beats in the heart
When it whispers in my thoughts!
Hate the SONG of our soul!
Ever singing
' Where we unite......
' There is life
' There is fate'
You can hate!
wooooooooow! ! ! ....woooooooow! ! ! .....it's really unbelievable.....it's touching....very significant.....I really like the way that the word flow on.... keeeeeeeeeeep on writing your wonderful poems... :) :)
Awesome! your expressions are too good. Loved every bit of it.10
personification, amzain, , i love what i just read it made me smile...well um i have an idea name a theme that me and you could write on id love to see how one theme could branch of into different ideas...nyc one
Hate me, if you can! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Hate this fragrance.... I got Collecting flowers... in the journey From my inner to your heart! - - - - - An amazingly beautiful poem - - -Can any one hate this fragrance ?
no we cannot hate.. all that you described n your poem cannot be hated........ hatred should not remain in the heart of a poet who sings always about goodness...... tony
I thirst for your poetry- -they taste unique, they have a tart tang of truth
There is a very profound message to these words. You state, and I think it may be overlooked, that hate is an act of will....Hate if you can. Love, acceptance....those are also acts of will. This poem is a great reminder that we all have profound choices to make. A great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Only one word, awesome! ! ! Its so subjective yet so general n i just love it :)