Have A Little Poem by janani ashwin

Have A Little

Rating: 5.0


Have a little mercy
On this troubled heart
A kind of forbearing
To give a fine start
Her bold moves on head she bears firm
Understands her own to handle in term

Have a little kindness
For it is quite due
A soul in distress
May ask it anew
Her kind deeds in action she travels within
No kindness goes waste of that she is prim

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 29 December 2009

hi this is indeed a smooth poem, rhymes giving it a nice song like feel. Simple words used with perfection to add depth to the meaning...connects well with life and experiences therein...good one...read my poem called ' LET HER NOT SACRIFICE ANYMORE'

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 December 2009

a wonderful poem...yes a distressed soul needs a kind caress...in your poem rhyme and emotion flow beautifully well....read my 'am not just a drop' page 1

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Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2009

heartfelt pleading good poetic...deserves a lot more than 'a little'! ...i liked the expression 'anew' there...it hides a lot of emotions inside...10

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