Silence Poem by janani ashwin

Silence

Rating: 5.0


Silence of the ocean
Shimmering in the sun
The waves are quietened
No sound beats the shore
Something to be thinking
It's strange to be this
He'll be back as always
I'm sure bring back bliss

Silence of the sungod
He retains the heat
Cloudy and chilled through
No blessings up beat
Something to be beaming
It's funny we're alive
His warmth and his brilliance
In heart I must hide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 December 2009

Your silence is our lovely poetic eloquence…a nice gift for me… Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kesav Easwaran 16 December 2009

the silence down in the ocean...the silence up in the sky of the sun...well, this poem hides inside the hopes of a longing heart and the anticipated blessings...beautiful...expressive, symbolic...good work Janani...10

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