Have You Ever Seen A Bird's Trail In The Barren Sky? Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Have You Ever Seen A Bird's Trail In The Barren Sky?

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The young stubborn birds fly away from their parent's nest
When they feel their wings are strong enough
And the mysterious destination wasn't written in the sky yet
But they insist to fly without their Guardian's consent.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 01 July 2008

You have penned a lonely mood. The barren sky denotes emptiness. Something has been lost that can never be replaced again. Good use of metaphor. Warm regards, Sandra

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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