He Said Poem by Melissa Black
He Said
He'll lay you down,
so soft, in delicate red.
Trace the lines along your neck,
and try to soothe the pain.
He'll satisfyingly answer for you,
when you are too weak to speak.
He'll gather your friends and family,
Bouquets of roses for you to keep.
He'll promise to take care of your car,
your money, your will, and your sanity.
And as you travel six feet under,
you'll realize what he meant.
A beautiful picture of love love lost in the mind real yet not not devotion yet devotion lost in confusion confusion only discovered when it's over and done
Holy cow this is still so amazing from the last time I read it! I think I liked it even better than in class :) you better get the rest of your poems on though... Lol
Melissa, this is so beautiful. You have an uncanny ability for flow that I'm am envious of. You most definately have a gift...
WOWZA! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This poem is super deep and the ending really hits you hard! It's very interesting. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 1:11:16 PM # 1.0.0.1119
1. wow 2. this is so vivid and amzing 3. i love it 4. this is due tomorrow or friday.. 5. good luck with the rest. (like u need it though) ha ha :) 6. i really enjoy reading ur stuff cuz they're so real and deep. 7. cant wait to read more! ! !