He Took Vow Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

He Took Vow



He was known as rough
Tough
Cruel
And devil

Never cared
Always dared
For wrong things
But achieved nothing

Bad luck always struck
As I spoke
But he will disregard
With offer of no ward

Today I saw him in tears
With no strength to bear
Pain in eyes
Despite brave try

His father was dead
He anxiety was clearly read
Many people came with condolences
To offer him at once

He was moved
With visible move
He took vow
Not to cause any harm or allow

Wednesday, August 13, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2014

Pretty Poem Nick Bure5 minutes ago I liked the rhythm. Some of the language was a little unclear to me. Pretty poem. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2014

good Deepesh Rathore5 minutes ago good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2014

He was known as rough Tough

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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