Angelo Turello

Heart - Poem by Angelo Turello

Through the open creaks
That left your heart so open
That left me falling down


Comments about Heart by Angelo Turello

  • Rookie - 12 Points Fiona Schwartzinoff (12/31/2013 9:28:00 PM)

    Unique! I love the... effect. :) Although I simple row of disappearing periods, they add depth.
    Check out my poems sometime! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 640 Points marvin brato (12/24/2013 7:32:00 PM)

    Falling into love with and open heart is remarkable experience though painful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (7/20/2013 8:44:00 PM)

    falling down is not easy. a painful write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,486 Points Patricia Grantham (6/7/2013 9:50:00 PM)

    Such a painful kind of love that
    can really leave you feeling sore.
    patch up the wound and go on.
    Good write. Many capabilities (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (5/9/2013 4:34:00 AM)

    I feel so much pain here.I also feel you leave something out.
    Elaborate, let the pain flow like a river. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,255 Points Adeline Foster (5/3/2013 4:58:00 PM)

    It's a start! Looking for more. Read Mine - O Dearest Love -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 28, 2013

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