Sleeping in your hunted tower alone
Deep inside feelings are buried
Human statue with a heart of stone
Outside the guardian beast is frenzied
The curse behind the handle is to live in groan
All will be lost to a heart that’s emptied
No one can see behind what’s shown
No one can bravely lead
This heart through the darkest zone
Even true love cannot feed
The cure that will atone
All the sufferance & the unfortunate deed
Many hearts came along
With a heart in a coma it’s impossible to read
Break down every wall & every bone
Still hopeless for a heart in a coma to bleed
Sitting up there on your throne
To finish up every given heart’s mead
& throw these hearts that will never be sewn
Love is a desperate feeling of need
With a heart in a coma fate is unknown
Everything is lost to a heart that’s emptied
This has a good beginning which captures the attention of the reader with vivid images and you carry out the theme throughout the poem. You tell it how it is or, at least, can be for all of us from time to time.
This one too, is an excellent write and I thank you, for bringing it, to my attention tonight!
lost in the places lost the desired quest tried for the best but found all the rest... smart rhying and more then enough to understand the feelings deep down the soul awesome writing, keep it up and thanks for sharing, ,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
awesome, from the title to the end welldone keep up the good work