A huge gate that never opened
Still no rust, no dust, upon its
Iron grills of angelic figures.
Standing patiently infront of it
I shouted everyday my name,
For their identity was unknown
To this worldly ignorant soul.
Then one day a reply floated out,
“Make your heart kind like wind
And no bar will resist you to enter.”
this poem - an invite for travelling! and you give hope for a happy end!
beautiful words............ Standing patiently infront of it I shouted everyday my name, Yes I add to it: Oh, Lord I am here, here my cry......................
Outstanding, brilliant and very innovative...................100 on 10...........comparison is par excellence. “Make your heart kind like wind And no bar will resist you to enter.”
True and honest soul always finds the path to the Heaven.Very nice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We should all aim towards heaven! With the muse of moral works. Nice piece.