Rebekah Hedquist

Heaven And Hell... - Poem by Rebekah Hedquist

My heart was sprawled on the floor,
Where all the memories that i once treasured laid in my heart,
After the terrible fight between the dark and the light,
His eyes glowed that evil red,
He toke it all away with just a snap of his fingers.

I tried to breathe but it hurt,
as if I was stabbed to death,
He took the people i once cared and loved in to his home and changed there ways,
except for the one of many I hold dear to my heart.

I tried to beg for mercy and ask for the light of god,
But I was stuck in the demons home,
Where fire and ash stayed,
The heat was unbearable,
You could say that i was in hell it self but i was not there,

I tried to save them all,
But they wouldn't listen,
They sent themselves to the lake of fire where they would suffer,
I wish i could stop it but i couldn't, i was only one person.

That moment the light i wished for took a hold of me,
Took me back home where i was safe and warm in the holy place of god.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this after i had read this book called 23 minutes in hell that is based on true story that i will never forget, I am a believer of Jesus Christ and i hold to all my readers try to let Jesus in you heart and you will see a difference.

Comments about Heaven And Hell... by Rebekah Hedquist

  • Rookie Rebekah Hedquist (4/10/2013 10:42:00 AM)

    thank you and no you won't die not right away anyway (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 5 Points Joshua Fegley (2/18/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    If I let Jesus into my heart, won't I die? It seems physically impossible. Not a fan of letting some guy into my body. Maybe the other way around though. Good write though. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 13, 2013

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