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jahanvi .......................


Heaven in human


Walking alone in d lane
I caught a glimpse of a girl
Her hairs falling on her face
Her clothes ruined wid mud
Her hands swollen due 2 cold
Her eyes dark like night
My eyes affixed on her
Affixed on d maturity in her
Affixed on motherly affection in her
Affixed on caring beauty in her

I asked her what is her name?
I asked her what she was upto?
I asked her what she wanna become?
I kept asking her
But she didn’t replied
and I came 2 know she couldn’t speak

how could ds happen?
where is d merciful god?
how can she b punished so crudely?
How?

D affection she is spreading
D love she is giving
D care is taking
D tears she is wipping
Wid only a smile
And jst a smile
No grudges
no complaints

she looked in my eye
n I was taken aback
for her eyes reflected
d sincerity
d forgiveness
d kindness
d never ending hope
d endless faith

life is tough
but not 4 her
life is colorful
life is bliss of nature
life is dreams
life is living
life is adventure
life is her

my words r lost
my vision is distorted
for she made me c a diff world
she made c a glimpse of heaven in her

Submitted: Saturday, January 16, 2010

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