jahanvi .......................


i broke a heart..


i broke a heart which was so dear
a heart dat loved me passionately
i broke a promise which was meant 2 be kept
a promise dat was lyf
i broke d trust of the one who cared
a trust of hope and believe
i broke the confidence of d person who confided in me
a confidence dat i would never betray
tears flow from d eyes which used 2 smile
and i became d reason for these tears
it's not easy to settle everything back
but its dreadfully difficult to see d pain in d eyes which rested upon me
i won't say 2 forgive me
but punish me coz d silence kills me from inside
i promise 2 never break ur heart again
coz it breaks me apart.
all i wanna say is 'I'M SORRY '

Submitted: Sunday, July 19, 2009

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  • Rookie - 659 Points V P Mahur (2/11/2014 2:51:00 AM)

    this poem reveals some real feelings (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (10/19/2012 2:10:00 PM)

    Please Note: There is no such word in English as 'dat'. It is merely a poorly spoken word for 'that'. It would enhance your poem greatly were you to change all 'dat's to 'that'. Otherwise this is a good effort.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Viji Cool (7/27/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    gud one
    a flow of emotions is shown
    he's surely gona understand ur feelings......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (7/22/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    hey, this is also nice poem
    and a real feeling, u express it well
    appriciated job!
    Luwi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Priyanka Bhowmick (7/19/2009 7:20:00 AM)

    u r sorry..that's more than enough.. u don need to regret for that now.. he'll definitly understand that...just u need to expose ur feelings to him n everythin will be alright

    i loved this piece.. filled with immense feelings n emotions.. keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aishwarya Tandon (7/19/2009 5:35:00 AM)

    its really nice, u've written it at one go, commendable effort (Report) Reply

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