Heaven On Earth Poem by Heenal Vora
Heaven On Earth
Remarks on calenders,
Homeworks not completed,
Assignments and projects delayed...
Exams tension,
Scoring marks is an achievement,
Greatest problem is horrible open house...
Lazy PT exercises,
Boring history lectures,
Confusing science preacticals...
Matters that take place,
Love affairs on going,
Teasing one another...
Throwing paper balls and hiding,
Cracking jokes on one another,
Irritating teachers above limits...
Feeling of achieving award
When teachers say,
'Worst class ever seen'
Innocence of telling lies when your mistakes get caught,
Sleepy class every morning,
Passing chits,
Waiting for reccess bell to ring...
Adventurous picnics and educational field trips,
exciting annual days,
festival and birthday parties,
the last is memorable farewell...
most innocent student,
most talkative student,
scholar student of the class,
dumb student of the class,
monitor of the class,
complain box of the class,
who were you? ? ?
Homeworks not completed! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Such is the life of teachers and students. Beautifully encapsulated in this artistic write. It would be intriguing to read a sequel. How some of those much maligned students turned out to be some of our leaders (both good and bad) . Congratulations on Poem Of The Day. Well deserved!
A very blunt poem on school life; but remember apart from all these frustrations there are some moments to be treasured throughout your life.(irritating teachers above limits...Feeling of achieving awardWhen teachers say, 'Worst class ever seen') These lines brought a smile to my lips.some naughty ones must be there in the class.Anyway I really enjoyed reading and you have the talent in you.so keep writing my child.God bless
Nostalgic feelings of the good old school days are aptly captured in the poem. Rich flow of thoughts with captivating images elegantly brought forth with clarity of mind. A beautiful creation Heenal. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Every individual who has gone through this mill will later feel same way and reminiscing the days gone by would mostly bring tears to eyes, because they were so unique, thrilling, innovative, exiting, adventuring, accomplishing, notorious, and still innocent. Thanks for sharing the interesting poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD.
Hi Heenal, Congratulations on selection as poet of the day. And for this Lovely Poem, , , ,
a nice poem of childish goings on at a time when time seamed to stand still? ............well penned.
This is a very nice poem about early days in school. Everyone wishes to go back to that time of carefree life and masti all day long with friends. Thanks for sharing. Congrats.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I terribly miss school days too.... congrats on being chosen.... a big 10 Heenal.......