Heaven's Light Poem by Tia Maria

Heaven's Light

Rating: 5.0


Lost in thought & then I found
a glowing light was all around
Sunset pinks set the stage
as angels danced across the page

The colours fade to a purple haze
as out the window I just gaze
Heaven was putting on a show
a gentle reminder to take it slow

A whisper, just be still today
Enjoy the peace, we heard you pray
Remember as day flows into night
Change must come, all is right

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 05 September 2008

this is a really lovely piece Tia and so very well written 10/10 regards Tom

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Fay Slimm 02 November 2008

Loved the phrase - 'heaven was putting on a show' this is uplifting work Tia, and reads aloud very well.10 from me. love Fay.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 13 September 2008

Wonderful piece- inspiring. Hopefully you continue to write

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Carpe diem-very lovely.

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Kris Smith 05 September 2008

In our daily lives we get side tracked by the normal daily running of life, and then something catches our eye, a falling leaf in the wind, sunbeams, stars, an ocean wave or even the smile on a young childs face and we gain back the significance of all around us. Those few minutes are priceless and full of wonder. your poem catches this, a worthy ten Chris

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Antonio Liao 05 September 2008

thanks... you have shadow my heaven's light... i can felt it as it glows it flow... it is all a whisper of moment that its the day... to remember that all are just passing scene...now is the time to wait the heaven light...thank you...a 10/10

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