Heavenly Sky Poem by Iniduo Iniduo

Heavenly Sky

Rating: 5.0


Borders are the sublimation of thought
that man owns the earth
and can divide her into pieces
of exclusiveness.
Clouds are driven by
a universal God
who writes in white and blue;
the earth is one,
she's for me and you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 December 2019

Beautiful rendition of words in a poignant verse written with spiritual insight. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 October 2018

Clouds are driven by a universal God who writes in white and blue; a very fine poem.. fine wordings, heavenly sky.. thank u. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 January 2018

Thank you for this lovely poem, amazingly worded. There is more to find under the Heavenly Sky, bet....you and I.... Can´t resist the rhyming. But I have enjoyed a very lot reading this amazing poem. A 10 and much-much-much more!

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Iniduo Iniduo 31 January 2018

Dankjewel!

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 June 2017

Clouds are driven by a universal God who writes in white and blue; God's creation in nature and human relatonship united in this poem. tony

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Gillena Cox 06 July 2012

nice contrast of freedom and constraint

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