Naveed Akram

Gold Star - 5,689 Points (15 December 1973 / London, England)

Heavenly Winter - Poem by Naveed Akram

Hastened by the cold is winter dealing swiftly with denial,
Hatred forces mildly, hinting at mortuaries, and graves.
Heaving in tatters, filling the ambition, having awkward goals,
When does heaven display a folding and sorting of goals?
The forces of carelessness and neglect are upon us,
Yet the letters of financial matters are lovely.
Cold the winter, heavenly the bursting of activity,
Memory is beautiful, of mountain like size.


Comments about Heavenly Winter by Naveed Akram

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/6/2009 3:02:00 PM)

    a beautiful and meaningful poem..10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,462 Points Marieta Maglas (6/6/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    ''Hatred forces mildly, hinting at mortuaries, and graves.
    Heaving in tatters, filling the ambition, having awkward goals,
    When does heaven display a folding and sorting of goals? ''
    very lovely poem, indeed..10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/6/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    Thanks with 10+ for this lovely and happy poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 6, 2009



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