C.R. Blazo

Rookie (11`21`79 - Present / Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania)

Hello Father - Poem by C.R. Blazo

The year is 1979.
Hello father
I am your son
You and mom have a wonderful chance
I am here for you
To mold. To refine.
To make better than you
A beautiful gift you are part of
Where have you gone?
Hello father
I am older now
I am growing like you
I am doing what you do
I am emulating you
But you don't see me
You don't pat me
Your back is what I see
Where have you gone?
Hello father
I am now turning teen
Changes in my life so complex
I have my own thoughts
I have my own beliefs
But I'm not sure if they are correct
Moms can only do so much
But a father to a son
Is mighty. Indestructible. Heroic.
Where have you gone?
Hello father
I am now a man
I know all about you
I know your type
I was too young to see
That you were not a father
Just a person playing one to me.


Comments about Hello Father by C.R. Blazo

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (11/1/2012 12:20:00 PM)

    The time is the cleaner in my ideas, the tiem will remind us lots of things
    well doen bro (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 348 Points Poetheart Morgan (10/7/2012 6:53:00 AM)

    speechless. Very, very touching! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,604 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/7/2012 6:33:00 AM)

    the feelings of a child about the father, who did not play his part..very touching! the last two lines are very effective! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,021 Points Valerie Dohren (10/7/2012 6:30:00 AM)

    A fathers love and presence is always so important - great write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (10/6/2012 11:07:00 PM)

    The urge to see father is so earnestly drawn here. It will be ringing for a long time in my ear.Kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,874 Points * Sunprincess * (10/6/2012 1:07:00 PM)

    awesome poem..I am totally speechless,
    kind of expected something more cheerful
    ..this one blows me away.. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 6, 2012



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