Treasure Island

Marria Attar


...HeR...


I wish I would always be with you
But I don’t know if you wish that too
I don’t know what you wish anymore
Or maybe it’s her you wish for
Why, why her? Why not me?
What, did you think that our relationship was never meant to be?
I have always been there for you
But it seems like you never knew
I have loved you like I have never loved someone else before
So tell me… do you love me or do you love her more?
What have I done wrong for you to do this to me?
I’ve always been the person you’ve wanted me to be
Love is a word that connects two people together in one knot
You’ve always said that to me but I guess you forgot
You always said that this knot was attached between me and you
But now I realize that whatever you said to me was never really true.

Submitted: Friday, September 05, 2008
Edited: Friday, September 05, 2008

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  • Melody Love (3/28/2010 4:18:00 PM)

    This poem is so beautiful because it shows all the emotion of what you're going through and how you feel which makes this so personal and special. I love it! (Report) Reply

  • Joseph S. Josephides (iosif S. Iosifidis) (9/15/2008 4:48:00 PM)

    Dear Maria, I like the phrase 'Love is a word that connects two people together in one knot'. Avoid too much descriptions. Talk more with pictures and meanings, which will stay. Keep on with new themes and ideas. Find new ways. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/9/2008 6:49:00 AM)

    'You always said that this knot was attached between me and you
    But now I realize that whatever you said to me was never really true.' This observation is so simple and so beautiful! 10 for it. (Report) Reply

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