(30-04-1991 / Nairobi)

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Her

I love her eyes, Window to her soul
Just like a peeping tom, I Peeped through
Loved what I saw: Beauty, humility, honesty
And so much more, I Bet she pissing off al gore
Cause she changing the climate in my heart
She so sweet, Look like sugar with clothes on
Her love could probably get me diabetic,
Not just saying this to sound poetic,
Swear she got me into geometry
Cause this from the deepest angle in my heart
Got so many things I had to tell her
Ain't good with words so I wrote this letter
She wants to be friends, hope its forever

Submitted: Tuesday, October 16, 2012
Edited: Friday, November 09, 2012

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this poem when I was in love.....I hoped this love would last forever.

Comments about this poem (Her by Brian Aredo )

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  • Jahan Zeb (10/29/2012 10:33:00 AM)

    What a start to the poem like the window to your beloved's soul!
    I love her eyes, Window to her soul
    The use of science in poetry hmmmmmmm intellectual conceits, , , , , , Metaphysical.
    Swear she got me into geometry
    and a hope for a permanent relation

    She wants to be friends, hope its forever

    This is a very nice write

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  • Babatunde Aremu (10/22/2012 3:41:00 PM)

    Very romantic. Good poem, I like it

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