Her Name Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Her Name

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"Marieta, Mareita, I uttered her name"
I was half awake and felt little shame
She was only few days close
I had chance with few nice moments to choose

Very nice face and silent nature
She may be looking like moon for sure
I told about this aspect to her
She was elated and same thing told me later

She was all set for best drive
Shape the destiny and relive
I found her best of all
She was beautiful, elegant and tall

I saw her in full blossom
In such scene she was seen seldom
She was behind curtain
Just staring with one in pain

Her eyes spoke of everything
Whole world reflected in eye and spoke of something
I tried to deep below but got no where
She may not allow me to dare

Dear, you are best and intelligent
As divine rose and heavenly sent
I need your company and want to present
Before world with head down words bent

She is unsure of my proposal
But I hope it may be met with approval
She is all for me and I have read those signals
I hope to sail through without any troubles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Hheehheheheehehe Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.ehheeh hope you are free and her too.. :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Geslany As Ging Alburo Duncan9 hours ago Do not leave the old for someone new for new is silver and the old is gold. hehehe Best of luck. Just step carefully in order to go forward successfully slow but sure execution hehehe check mine tooo :) Comment 1 Comment+1 Niice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Niice Cameron Newsome4 minutes ago Good poem Comment +1 love poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Christina Perdue6 minutes ago I like the theme about love for a woman, and the uncertainty of her response. It is a clear poem, and easy to understand an

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

“Marieta, Mareita, I uttered her name” I was half awake and felt little shame

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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