Her Struggle Poem by Serena Taylor

Her Struggle

Rating: 5.0


The sky was pitch black
Stars twinkled and shone.
She watched in wonder,
The moon was the throne.

She watched the sky in wonder
And a shooting star passed.
She quickly made a wish
And hoped that it last.

Then she set out on her journey
All on her own
She hoped to succeed
And become well known.

But it isn't that easy
Success comes with a price.
Patience is a virtue
One which is nice.

She struggled and fought
She lost and she won.
At times she felt like quitting
But when she looked up at the sun.

It filled her with happiness,
Courage and strenght.
So she continued her journey,
Holding her heart out at arms lenght.

Life is a gift
So follow your dreams
Because you only live once
But everything is not what it seems

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 10 May 2012

Well written and delivered.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 03 May 2012

Great motivational poem sister...well done! !

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Liliana Roman 26 April 2012

i like how you set it up like a story. i love the last stanza! ITS AWESOME! ! ! ! ! wow sorry i accidentally hit caps lock. good write. keep writing.

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