Here And Now Poem by indira babbellapati

Here And Now

Rating: 5.0


this i've noticed of late
that my self is weary
trying to tune itself
to hear those
distant melodies
the ears long for
a melody tuned
here and now
this i've noticed of late
that this skin is weary
of imagined caresses
and longs a tryst
even if it meant
a passing touch
of the little finger
but here and now

09oct2009
00.25hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 08 October 2009

That magical touch is required by us from time to time, when we reach this stage of our life; to retune our inner gyroscope, to give a feel of our inner life force! Thanks for sharing! 10! -Raj

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Rakesh Bedi 09 October 2009

i agree with you, at times.....it is even worse than your 'here n now '.....by the way, indira, the title, to me, sounded like an order of a supreme court judge....

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 09 October 2009

beautiful poem. sublime! i just loved it. thank you ma'am!

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Maitreyee Joshi 09 October 2009

simple words, yet they convey what they mean, here and now.thanks ma'am.

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Patrick A. Martin 09 October 2009

Indira go and get yourself a hug right here and now 10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 July 2010

Voidness and passionate yearning ‘canopied’ with oozing emotives… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Saadat Tahir 21 October 2009

the essence of here and now capture so welll.....and blooming dells of yonder worlds... what gd... so the promises....... very nice cheers & ten

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 16 October 2009

here and now....here and now such a beautiful composition! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 October 2009

Immmmmm Indira. You are wonderful in expressing those tender feelings.....what can I say? What can I do? ?

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Anand Madhukar 14 October 2009

A lovely piece imbued with a deep sense of pain and loneliness.

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visakhapatnam, india
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