indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Hey...Spring Again! - Poem by indira babbellapati

the veil of fog
gets thinner and thinner
the seasonal flowers
lose their color
as the sun's chariot
gets rolled as it should
the koel fills the ears
with its cooing fed on
the tender mango-flower
that renders more sweetness
to a voice already sweeter
every vegetation begins to breathe
resurrecting life once again

after sluggish winter
birds chirp
bees buzz
hearts long
as spring slowly unfolds
its drama of desire
once again...!

21feb2010
11.32hrs


Comments about Hey...Spring Again! by indira babbellapati

  • Gold Star - 8,372 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/25/2013 6:55:00 PM)

    Spring brings hope. Drama of desire unfolds. Koels sweet melody is it from mango flowers? Nice spring poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (2/27/2010 9:09:00 PM)

    Lovely spring imagery from halfway around the world.
    Here small daffodils are struggling to lift
    their fragile blooms above the snow. But
    sometimes there is great strength in
    fragility.10++ for you.

    Always,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 158 Points Leonard Dabydeen (2/24/2010 1:49:00 AM)

    Beautiful! I really like the way you try to entice the seasonal change with the 'koel fills the ears with its cooing' and 'every vegetation begins to breathe/resurrecting life once again'. Rich imagery bringing spring to life.
    Enjoy the read.
    Thnx for sharing.
    Blessings.
    Leonard (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 21, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 13, 2010


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