Highway Is Opened Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Highway Is Opened

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No entry is removed,
Highway is opened,
Journey is started,
Lorries are running.

Weather is cloudy,
Rain has to come,
For crossing far miles,
Drivers are in hurry.

Daily life is busy life,
Life's highway is eternal,
Souls are drivers,
Bodies are like vehicles.

Never ending this journey is,
Obeying cosmic laws soon,
Carefully driving is important,
Beauty is seen in unity.

Green garden of God is lovely,
Highway is made to heaven,
Carefully driving in this,
We have to cross the gate ahead.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,09 October 2017. All rights reserved.

Highway Is Opened
Monday, October 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,perception,road,social,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,09 October 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Highway is nicely opened. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 October 2017

Daily life is busy life, Life's highway is eternal, Souls are drivers, Bodies are like vehicles. A great metaphor by Mahakul Ji.

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Michael Walker 10 October 2017

A really good photo and I like your early stanzas because I constantly see big truck drivers 'in a hurry'. I identify with truck drivers and now I can sight the spiritual roads which I had not thought about.

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Susan Williams 09 October 2017

There is such driving beat to this! ! ! Hustling on down that road, hurtling toward eternity! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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