Him Poem by Batool Abdulhafid

Him



I loved you with all ur flaws
I loved you and thats against our law
Everything you did is played in ma head like a show
I wish I can beg you not to go
But man what shall I do with my Ego?

Your love made me alive
I feel that I survive

Your smile light up my heart
I wish we will never be apart

Your eyes blew me away
And I stutter, dont know what to say

Your presence makes me breathless
I just want you, no body else

Your looks makes me crazy
And I directly feel dizzy

Your happiness is ma pleasure
Simply you are my treasure

I see your face in the crowd
I love you and Im proud

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
-Batool Abdulhafid
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Utsav Patel 23 May 2013

You spilled hormonal gush in this poem... Simply good... I like it...

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Unwritten Soul 20 May 2013

Nice wordings, nice rhyming and it done in very well shape Batool_Soul

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Greta poem Batool, can feel the power in your words.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 May 2013

your happiness is my pleasure, very good. I invite you tom read my poems and comment.

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