Hold your breathe
Till death
For beautiful rainbow to appear
That shall emerge near
You will find love's image
In your earl age
To feel one of the luckiest
With the possession of best
Your fancy may drive
To survive
In new dreamland
That shall hold you as dear friend
Hold any color you like
But it must strike
Its importance
At once
Your dream shall be fulfilled
As sun ray's are beamed
To serve as back ground
For your dreams' to be found
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Nice Joey The Ace15 minutes ago Loved the positive ending. Full of hope. Comment +2
Strong Images Erika Syphax12 minutes ago Powerful. Comment +1
Structure Well Gardenia Mae11 minutes ago It's a bit dull but the structure and flow is fairly well done. Keep writing!
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Hold your breathe Till death