Hold Color Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Hold Color

Rating: 5.0


Hold your breathe
Till death
For beautiful rainbow to appear
That shall emerge near

You will find love's image
In your earl age
To feel one of the luckiest
With the possession of best

Your fancy may drive
To survive
In new dreamland
That shall hold you as dear friend

Hold any color you like
But it must strike
Its importance
At once

Your dream shall be fulfilled
As sun ray's are beamed
To serve as back ground
For your dreams' to be found

Wednesday, July 23, 2014
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Hold your breathe Till death

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Aircool Alisin likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Nice Joey The Ace15 minutes ago Loved the positive ending. Full of hope. Comment +2

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Strong Images Erika Syphax12 minutes ago Powerful. Comment +1

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Structure Well Gardenia Mae11 minutes ago It's a bit dull but the structure and flow is fairly well done. Keep writing!

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Gajanan Mishra 23 July 2014

find love's image, beautiful sir, I like it,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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