Naveed Akram

Gold Star - 5,336 Points (15 December 1973 / London, England)

Homes - Poem by Naveed Akram

I am not blushing due to my home,
In this structure I do live.
This home is a scent and sense,
A link to the outside.
My blushing is of others, of rude strangers,
Who keep my home’s façade with dignity.
Home has a heavenly scent, suspense is in the ceiling,
The narrow corridors rely on spiders to clean the aura,
As cobwebs are so wonderful.
My faith is in the homes we build
For the rich and the poor,
The rich are in agony, and the poor savour
The air of the rooms they live in.


Comments about Homes by Naveed Akram

  • Rookie - 446 Points Indira Renganathan (7/3/2009 4:16:00 AM)

    Speaks much about a home..I like the last two lines10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie rago rago (7/3/2009 3:43:00 AM)

    fine fine...........and well written............... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (7/3/2009 3:43:00 AM)

    A very nice poetic pictorial of a home........unique theme! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 3, 2009



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