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Tomorrow maybe, maybe not.
I sure think of it a lot.
Better, better I hope.
Another day, nope.
But I keep dreaming,
Everyday seeming,
Tomorrow maybe, maybe not.
When it happens, to be sure,
I'll be happy, that's the lure.
(June 11,2008, Katy, Texas)
Jim Norausky
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Surayya Abbas (6/2/2009 4:08:00 PM)
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very powerful message.Hope is life.
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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (5/4/2009 10:28:00 PM)
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There is a great message in this poem Jim. I like the way you have spaced it out, as it works really well, also the rhyme adds to its effect. 'I'll be happy that's the lure, I will be dam happy that's the cure.' 10/10 Karin Anderson
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Rita Shay (2/6/2009 2:46:00 PM)
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Wow. Now this is a good poem! I can completely relate to this. Hope is such a wonderful thing. You've probably read it, but if you haven't I'm sure you'd enjoy Emily Dickens' ' Hope is the thing with feathers'
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Marie Shine (1/28/2009 12:35:00 PM)
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'Hope springs eternal'........... Sometimes all we have is hope and all that keeps us going is hope.Jim if I had a magic wand you would be happy every moment of every minute, of every hour, of every day, of every week, of every year through eternity.......... I love this poem because it shows that if today isn't all it should be, there's always tomorrow which may be.10++++++++++
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John Mccudden (1/21/2009 12:59:00 PM)
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Hi jim i like this gets to the point hope or not well might be or not. yes i like it nice peice of work
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JoAnn McGrath (6/15/2008 8:43:00 AM)
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Got to have faith and hope to make it: O)
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Kevin Wells (6/13/2008 1:56:00 PM)
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Interesting style, Jim. Let's see some more.
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Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/11/2008 11:40:00 PM)
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hope is the only we have in abundance..well done
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