'How are you and where are you? '
Would you mind if I so ask you?
Urge ran high so I asked you,
Do you think it right if I so ask you?
You were so nice and dear,
You are far away as I hear,
Pain is so high but I bear,
Find no means to stay just near,
Did I so offend?
lived so simple and ways also mend,
flowers and roses found its way,
I still found no other say,
You declined for a photo,
Even I had no such motto,
Still asked for a flicker,
But alas! you proved tinker,
Had it not been the business?
and love a commodity,
Had I not a been gentle man?
and you be a businesswoman
It would have been a reality,
A mere necessaisity and not the quality,
Be that not even turn farce,
Be that not rude but always be nice
Found in you always a treasure,
Enjoyment more but never a measure,
safety and securiy always I assure,
But you buckled under so pressure,
Was it a right path? I don't know,
In a prayer always I bow,
Still a mystery and no reason how,
It can be any but not sacrad cow,
You may stay calm and cool,
All will be fine and I only fool,
continue to stare but find no glare,
blaze from within but take no care
How are and where are you? __I'm fine and i'm here, .. Would you mind if i so ask you? __Oh no problem you ask that. Urge ran high so i asked you__okkkkk: thumb: Do you think it right if i so ask you? __of course i'think this is right....right..hmmm., tanks for ask.+10
‘…But alas! you proved tinker, …’ ‘…continue to stare but find no glare, // blaze from within but take no care…’ Tinker = Gypsy do you mean that…mismatch for love… And finally Poet realized ‘…but take no care’. I suppose she [or he] is a ‘No’ person… Excellent poem Tenner Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to new posts: 'Size Zero ~ Ground Zero' and 'Past'….comments if you please… niv
Had it not been the business? and love a commodity, Had I not a been gentle man? and you be a businesswoman 10
'How are you and where are you? ' Would you mind if I so ask you? ....10
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I would like to translate this poem
very well manner behavior...10