How To Respond! Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

How To Respond!

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Oh, Lord how to react to my elders?
How to pay gratitude to all my readers?
What a hidden well wishers they are?
I was pushed simply very far

How could I dispel their feelings?
Was I ever ready or willing?
How can well knit organization be left?
How can there be overnight shift?

I misjudged the reader's mood
Poetry is just tonic and food
It has divine infusion with great thrust
We all must pray almighty for its preservation and is must

I shall stay and must continue
Must give to larger audience whatever is their due
What is their in appreciation or condemnation
It is permanent bond and solidly laid foundation

Let each brick carry its own weight
Then only building can gain its height
The stone at the base can see with honor and pride
I must uphold this view and never hide

They are no seized with domestic problems
But disgruntled with happenings around them
Some of the poems may not appeal them earnestly
This is a normal cause and I must admit it frankly

If all the pots made by potters find the way
Not a place in market will be left to stay
Some poems may find applaud and appreciation
Others may go down with displeasure and condemnation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2011

That’s the spirit Mehta sir. A wonderful poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. With kind regards Maria Zafar, Delhi Oct 22,2011

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2011

Dear Mehta-ji, I was carried away by your following lines - I shall stay and must continue Must give to larger audience whatever is their due What is their in appreciation or condemnation It is permanent bond and solidly laid foundation This is the reason why you are inseparable for 'Muse India' Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata Oct 22,2011 -

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2011

» Elż bieta Kry.. Thank you.... with all my heart..... thank you..... and very please..... do not go away....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2011

Marina MM Thank you for all that you wrote here and never leave, please... believe, all friends need your poetry

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2011

GINA Believe me, I tried to always read what you posted but do not quite understand the message often! I'm sorry!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2011

↑ 0 ↓ pennyh 2011.10.22 21: 16 Poetry comes from the heart, and the mind, the soul, and the spirit... in fact, the more we write, the richer we become... Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2011

JRNightingale 2011.10.22 16: 52 Good response. Write for yourself and you will eventually find an audience. Not all our poems attain success - I say this for nearly every poet on line. Sometimes it is our average poems which find a connection with an audience. On this site I say to people that when a poem is posted that is the beginning. The pages created are permanent and can be shared around online and gradually awareness is built upon. Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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