I Admire Poem by ramesh rai

I Admire



I admire with pleasure
when cloud thundered with musical note
a flashing crew toucher my heart
the breeze whispered in my ear
the fragrance of distant flower
came with blowing wind when
the atmosphere was tranquil and silent
my vow spreaded its wings
to fly over sky to sing and dance
the old banyan was also dancing
with pleasure but mute
to understand the language of my heart
I came across the sky flower
cheered with its fragrance.

Sunday, September 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

Beautiful Imagery of words.......Beautiful lines. he old banyan was also dancing with pleasure but mute to understand the language of my heart I came across the sky flower cheered with its fragrance. The whole sky turned into a flower..... Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 September 2014

Sky flower what a beautiful concept. Sky, the whole sky looking like a flower. Amazing. Thank you.

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