love poem for my mother and my best friend
How am I going to spent day and night?
How am I going to live my life with out you?
How am I going to survive with out your appearance?
How am I going to fight back of my enemies with out your advices?
How am I going to be happy with out you by my side?
How am I going to smile with out you near me?
How am I going to?
I have nothing with out you by my side
How can I be strong with your invisible slide?
No body is going to support me when I got weak
How can I see me with out you for a week?
Through the sprit of your love I will be strong
Through the power of your love I will be honest
Through the braveness you have I will be smart
So the worst thing which can happen to me is...
I am going to miss you...
it was perfect..... you got so much feelings.. i hope to see anothe work soon.
How can anyone even think of judging or commenting on a poem so personel? I have no idea what to say, I can't imagine me having written that for my mother because I cant imagine life without her! it actually has really touched me and made me want to appreciate my mother and family more :) Thank you for sharing something so deeply personal. Those questions you wrote are ones I hope you will find answers to as only you can answer them. Its unbelievably amazing that after what ever has happend between you and your mother you are still able to write about it! perhaps it wasnt recent but weldone and good luck. :)
A Very heart touching poem... Read the -ve of this poem my poem ALL ALONE...
what a truly beautiful poem, I can fully empathize with exactly what you have written, you have conveyed your thoughts so compassionately and have touched others with your honesty along the way, an amazing piece :)
All that you have mentioned above are written with all the thoughts put together. keep it up.10+++++++++
Luwi, you are telling me my story and feelings............in such a golden words. I have no words, may God bless you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes indeed..the memory lives on so we are encouraged to leave positive ones as we are not sure when and if we pass this way again. Nice write.