Abdul Wahab

I Am In, You Are Out - Poem by Abdul Wahab

When I fall asleep
The dream comes in
When the dream comes
You come in
When you come in
It makes me awake
Leaving me uneasy
Unhappy and jittery.
Again I feel sleepy.
After marriage
When you come
I fall in deep sleep
The dreams come in
Instead of you some one in
Monotony and boring
Anaemia and drought
I am in, you are out.

Comments about I Am In, You Are Out by Abdul Wahab

  • Veteran Poet - 1,920 Points Pheko Motaung (5/26/2012 6:55:00 AM)

    A humorous masterpiece of the wonderful creative spirit at work.How you conjure up such delightful images is beyond my mortal comprehension.But you belong up there with the stars that bring to us the beauty of your majestic poems! Thanks for inviting us to the wonder world of your fantastic fancy (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 70,859 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/23/2012 10:40:00 PM)

    Fine poem, heart touching. It has a eternal value. Thanks poet.
    I invite you to read my poem and comment.
    Gajanan Mishra (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 23, 2012

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