Treasure Island

TARA.. Star


I AM LOST


I am lost in darkness....
dont know what to follow?
O' allah help me please,
&let me out from this sorrow


Why peroid of waiting is so long?
I'm forgetting, from where i belong!
i'm confused in between
For what i actually long? ?


So many questions, mark my face,
I'm speechless, without any trace
Is that all what i deserve? ?
Or its just a beggining for another race? ?

Submitted: Friday, May 15, 2009
Edited: Sunday, May 17, 2009

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  • Nooruddeen Mm (5/28/2009 5:03:00 PM)

    Very easy diction
    A nice and small poem, that can enjoy every one.
    A normal reader does not need a dictionary when going thru this poem.

    Keep it up
    Nooruddeen (Report) Reply

  • Shekhar Joshi (5/24/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    Discover the allah in yourself...you will see all the doubts melt. and u will regain your confidence back.

    a sad poem....hopelessness portraied well though (Report) Reply

  • Patrick Barongan (5/22/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    as i read this poem i can feel the fear of being lost. but in life our roads we take will always have bumps in it or detours in which makes us swerve from our paths but do not fear for we all eventually return to them.
    i really do like this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Is It Poetry (5/22/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    Allaha will lead you,
    from one race to the
    next, with little if any
    breath, so you wont cry...iip (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (5/22/2009 1:03:00 PM)

    very nice potent and feeling lines there
    did a nice job at communicating the feelings..
    its ten from me
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Bright Rose (5/20/2009 1:05:00 AM)

    Amen, my lovely poet, that was very evocative and strong piece fine piece of poetry, anyone can relate to, you have put your heart and soul in it lovely :) (Report) Reply

  • Abida Rahman (5/17/2009 11:14:00 AM)

    keep making dua3, keep praying... inshallah the answers will come clear... Allah never puts you through something you can't handle, be patient. nice write. Salam (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Martyres (5/17/2009 8:25:00 AM)

    Nice write...do not worry the answers will come as you keep asking the right questions...We are all born with innate strengths to work out the answers for ourselves.10 (Report) Reply

  • Shweta Advani (5/17/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    hey buddy gud write.. the answers r on their way..coz u have started the first step of askin questions which so many people never embark upon...just keep the faith....n look to God..: -) 10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Marie Shine (5/17/2009 8:12:00 AM)

    A very nice poem Tara.Well written & presented.
    Nobody is ever really lost and the answers are INSIDE each any everyone of us, just to look for them with an open mind and also an open heart.The answer to anything you've every wanted to know is there and will reveal itself to you in the fullness of time.
    10/10 from me. (Report) Reply

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