TARA.. Star


I need a chance....


I need a chance to explore my life,
I need a chance to stand up right
I need a chance to live in my dreams
& turn them true as they seems..
I wish to explore, the whole universe,
I wish to live like a bird..
I wish to live in the stars,
Might please me living so far.
My presence would brightup them,
Gloomy nights would be lessen then..
I need a chance to touch the sky,
I need a chance to fly so high..


I need a chance…..

Submitted: Sunday, April 26, 2009
Edited: Monday, April 27, 2009

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  • Rookie - 893 Points Kee Thampi (4/29/2009 11:50:00 PM)

    wings of fire and wish to cherish
    and she wish to live like a bird..in this sky to...
    I wish to live in the stars,
    Might please me living so far.
    My presence would brightup them, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (4/28/2009 12:13:00 AM)

    Nice little poem. I hope you will avail the chance. The world and the life is full of chances. I hope you will explore it to the best of your abilities.

    Best Wishes
    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie , aryaindia (4/27/2009 8:46:00 AM)

    Your poem is full of innocence and is delightful in content and perception. Only thing, you need to leave out common told words to give your poem better effect. Nice thoughts..........keep writing..............arya with blessings. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ahmad Aldeen (4/27/2009 8:29:00 AM)

    Thats truth my freind. We all need a chance to revial the potential we got inside..
    Their is no revolution anymore: so this poem could have a mass effect. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dakotas Angel (4/27/2009 8:27:00 AM)

    That is nice and theirs always chances in life just have to learn which one is the right one good work i like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Monica Kulal (4/27/2009 2:33:00 AM)

    gud one.. we all need a chance.. and wen we get a chance we shdnt leave tht chance.. howeva.. life is to explore.. search new hopes! so letz make d life wid all our chance.. lovely peom.. really touchd ma heart..! ! but there is a mistake in 3rd line.. wud u pls correct it.. tc! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,674 Points Is It Poetry (4/26/2009 5:04:00 PM)

    It is
    very enchanting
    this grasp of
    yours to reach
    the edge
    night sky so high
    sweet is song when
    sung at night
    stars sigh..iip (Report) Reply

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