TARA.. Star


Go With The Flow - Poem by TARA.. Star

No words will wipe ur tears,
I know whts making u fear,
Had betrayed is not easy
Time will pass &u'll used to be
Dont stop ur life, its just a pause
Never stop dreaming for any stupid cause
Being lost in dark nights, would give u nothing
Be brave &help urself by being somthing
Focus on ur aim, problem comes and go
Dont stop urself, just go with the flow, ,


Comments about Go With The Flow by TARA.. Star

  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (5/30/2009 7:52:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem and full of advices to the humans......attractive title too....10++
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  • Gold Star - 4,522 Points Is It Poetry (5/27/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    the flow is upward into your life, the sand is your warm fusion, as you sit happy, content in the wisdom of a rose always in bloom, spreading scents heady brew, on the unsuspecting..iip (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (5/27/2009 5:21:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem and read it again and liked it more than before... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shekhar Joshi (5/24/2009 1:43:00 PM)

    ahh beautiful
    really problem comes and go

    lovely work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~....my Life Is My Poem....~ (5/23/2009 3:42:00 PM)

    its wonderful, , it seems to me this beautiful msg in this beautiful poem is just for me....[but actually for all]..this poem have changed my thinking..thanx..! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bright Rose (5/20/2009 1:02:00 AM)

    very deep and lovely short poem, well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie OuSs@Ma Samouna (5/17/2009 11:35:00 AM)

    wow.... it's really the best short poem I have ever read...
    ++++++++++10
    I'll book mark it as a favorite
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Yasser Koor (5/16/2009 3:36:00 AM)

    no words will wipe the tears,
    Wow wow wow i told you dear poet, , you are so hopefule girl.
    it is great poem.
    i think i should learn something from your poems someting about the hope.
    problem comes and goooooooooooo
    being lost i dark night, will give me nothing
    cheers
    Yasser (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Akram Saqib (5/15/2009 12:57:00 PM)

    good words saying never stop thinking about a nonsense idea.good expression (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/15/2009 12:48:00 PM)

    A poem in favor of mankind,10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hazem Al Jaber (5/14/2009 12:04:00 AM)

    yes... its a true and a facts that we face always..
    so beautiful dear tara..
    keep on...
    hazem al.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (5/13/2009 6:50:00 PM)

    Good write
    good job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (5/13/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    wise words written beautifully Tara... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,201 Points Saadat Tahir (5/13/2009 2:25:00 PM)

    a well written fable with good flow
    thanx
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Shweta Advani (5/13/2009 11:27:00 AM)

    hey...nice one...i just loved the theme coz i too live my life with this mantra...go with the flow..10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (5/13/2009 11:13:00 AM)

    Very focused, compact and to the point poem.
    Carefully worded, beautifully expressed. An easy 10 for this one, Tara.

    Best Wishes
    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/13/2009 8:37:00 AM)

    Finding a focus point in something is important. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 13, 2009



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