Larisa Rzhepishevska

Rookie - 18 Points (Odessa, Ukraine)

I am on diet


I’ll put on diet my fattish ass
So that the doorway I could pass.
I’ll do some exercises to lose weight
As fat asses I just hate.
I would like to look a model of super class
Or may be like a slander lass.
I know it’s too bad to amass fat,
But…while rhyming this couplet
I am looking at an apple pie
And a big saliva appears in my eye.

Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

Submitted: Wednesday, May 12, 2010

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  • Rookie - 18 Points Larisa Rzhepishevska (5/12/2010 4:28:00 PM)

    I am not really that fat. I have written this poem just in a comic style. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Larxene (you can call me Larxy) Addesso (5/12/2010 4:20:00 PM)

    wow this is so real to how every girl on the planet feels but i dont think you shuld see yourself this way, i dont know you or wat you look like but as poet to poet im sure you are amazing and no matter wat the stupid scale says im sure your beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rina Ilazi (5/12/2010 4:11:00 PM)

    this is the bitter reality of our days! that's why i like it. (Report) Reply

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