I Am Unable To Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Am Unable To

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I am unable to hold
Happiness and joy in world
As they come near
But I suspect and fear

I have many weaknesses
That reflects clearly on face
I try to hide and pretend
But that seems no end

I have yet to live more
Keep some near and adore
The chance is open to explore
I stay in close therefore

Chances are bright
As he is person right
For me and for my future
I am very much sure

I wish to survive
And revive
And honestly long to live
With firm resolve to believe

But ideas rush and diminish
I fear no good finish
Let life be given trial
Facts should not be exposed to denial

I shall hold on till last
As life is moving very fast
I may be simple and ordinary
But all these things are necessary

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Post Very good. Ana Pelayo6 minutes ago Yes, very good. Comment +1 dont try so hard

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William Crago5 minutes ago rhyming is a gift but not essential for poetry. this just seemed to contrived.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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