deep pain.........its hurting me
my heart empty.........what happened to thee
chest tight.........dont say those hurtful words
friend comes running.........theres no laughing
rush of rain........all i see are clear skies
makeup smeared.........im all in tears
gimme that towel.........blue as his eyes
this is so good. my favorite was the last line. it kinda gave insight to what the poem is about...or maybe i'm reading too much into it. either way, i like it.
luv it the part i liked was chest tight, don't say those hurtful words, i give that line to my ex.
thats so sad. my favorite line...: rush of rain.....all i see are clear skies. that made the poem. i loved it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ease your pain by extricating the unwanted pleasures............