The slightest thing it seems will bring, me
back to happier days. To the time when you
were once mine, until we parted ways.
~
No more do we walk hand in hand. On moonlit
nights across the sand. The moon now hides
behind black clouds. I stand alone beneath
these shrouds.
~
The stars above, now no longer twinkle the way
they used to do. All I can say is I miss you each
day. I love you still and I always will
'' I can't get over you ''.
~
I pray the day will come. Our love we shall renew.
That you'll be back and then. Unlike the past
this time it will last. For broken hearts can mend.
~
Oh our love then would be a symphony. That we
could hear each day. This music of love 'twould
never end. For it's meant to be it's ''my destiny''.
To hold you in my arms again.
I hope one day you will feel the same way and
realize you love me too. Until the day you come
back to stay - I can't get over you...
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~TJW~
ouch... I feeeeel the pain... what love does to us hey - well, on the bright side at least we know we still have loving hearts. Imagine not feeling anything at all. Best wishes, T
This is so sad Thad, its hard to move on sometimes, hope you can mend your broken heart, well penned, 10 Lynda xx
It is sad but fine poems simultaneously... Have hope.... - who knocks, for them always opens doors.... 10x10 .... Happy New Year, Thad, Tsira
break ups are painful- universal feeling, yet hope keeps us going- very sad, moving and well expressed.10 Mamta
notwithstanding the parting, the poem reveberates with hope...that's how it should be!
This poem shows full feeling/ expression Well done again Thad Love duncan X
You have truly captured the sad feeling of loss in this poem Thad. A very fine work indeed. Best wishes, Andrew
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A sad one mate, hope it's not true my friend... Andy 10